tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8000793623156731154.post5579924635808141800..comments2023-04-25T17:32:55.324-04:00Comments on Dear Pino: Letter Twelve—Marquand Loses His SmileUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8000793623156731154.post-76704455955089415442012-09-09T10:42:07.405-04:002012-09-09T10:42:07.405-04:00I'm a french Storyteller preparing KingMaker. ...I'm a french Storyteller preparing KingMaker. I find your text "Marquand Loses His Smile" very interesting. Thank you for publishing it. <br /><br />LiliandreAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8000793623156731154.post-72510651437089623872011-09-03T20:26:30.035-04:002011-09-03T20:26:30.035-04:00The latter 2/3rds is amongst the best you've d...The latter 2/3rds is amongst the best you've done. Then again, maybe it has to do with the irrational joy that I feel when reading about the current state of your relationship with Lily. So tragic!<br /><br />I did like how you broke the linear narrative to think back on Lily at the foot of the troll hideout. And I also enjoyed the description of Lev as a mantis. And a cliffhanger ending to boot! Good stuff.Philhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09287340876111006366noreply@blogger.com